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Boy Alice in Wonderland
Episode 4
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Izumi(Somehow, it's gotten to the real thing in the blink of an eye. The production is good, but I'm most worried about the lead and second lead......)
ItaruOi, Masumi ーー.
Masumi......Hmph.
Izumi(Lately they've been constantly like this. I wonder if they'll be alright.)
ItaruI said too much. I'm saying I'm sorry.
MasumiDon't talk to me
ItaruWaiーー.
Sigh......
IzumiAre you alright?
ItaruAs you can see, I'm being treated like a stalker.
TsuzuruSorry. It's because I gave you unnecessary advice.
IzumiThere's no problem with the quality of the acting, but......
ItaruI guess. He did say he'd do that part properly.
TsuzuruThen maybe it's enough already. Groups that don't get along can still mesh on stage.
IzumiWell, that's true, but......
(That person's coming to practice today, so I wonder if it'll be alright.)
Yuzo......
Izumi......
Yuzo......
IzumiH-How was it......?
Yuzo......Honestly, I came to give a thorough beat-down, and yet. How boring.
IzumiEh!?
SakuyaIn other words......
TsuzuruNo complaints!?
CitronYuzo's been vanquished!
YuzoDon't get ahead of yourselves!
TsuzuruStill, Citron's been using a lot of old words lately.
CitronI've been getting into tiger dramas!
TsuzuruTaiga dramas, you mean.
SakuyaBut isn't it the first time you've had no complaints?
ItaruMiraculous.
IzumiIt's because everyone was all over the place during the debut play.
SakuyaIt's a good thing we kept practicing while the other troupes were performing!
YuzoWell, I don't have complaints. I don't have complaints, but I do have things to say.
Masumi......What?
YuzoWith regards to the little details, those should improve as you bounce off each other while performing, but......
You're not playful enough.
MasumiPlayful?
YuzoIf you don't have more random, spontaneous conversations, I won't want to see it several times over.
IzumiI see......
SakuyaIt's true that this play is a dialogue-driven play, so to make up for the lack of movement we have to show changes through the conversation.
TsuzuruThere are a lot of motifs specific to "Alice", so it's also long-winded at times......
YuzoParticularly the Hatter and Alice. Your long conversations aren't bad, but at the moment, they're not interesting either. Try to think about what to do together.
Masumi......
Itaru......
Izumi(I've talked to the two of them too, but that made their relationship worse.)
TsuzuruAs expected, he went after that......
SakuyaBut if their relationship gets worse than it is now......
Izumi(Still, we can't leave things as they are.)
We'll all try to think over things again.
YuzoDo that. Work hard on the performance.
IzumiThank you very much!
TsuzuruThanks!
SakuyaWe'll work hard!
Izumi......We said that, but what should we do?
TsuzuruWhat if we put in some adlib elements that changed every day like we did during Romeo & Julius?
SakuyaThat sounds good!
IzumiThat was well-received.
MasumiI don't know how to do adlibs.
IzumiEh? But you put them in before too.
MasumiThat was only because adlibs were put in and I just responded.
SakuyaNow that you mention it, Masumi-kun never took the initiative to put in adlibs.
IzumiThen, this time, be aware of that and ーー.
MasumiI don't want to.
IzumiEh?
MasumiThis time, I want to do things perfectly as you tell me. If I change the lines and movements, that'll crumble.
IzumiThat's......my words aren't everything, so it's okay to break them.
ItaruThose broken parts will become the playfulness that Yuzo-san was talking about.
SakuyaThat's right, Masumi-kun.
TsuzuruJust try it.
CitronLet's dry!
TsuzuruTry.
MasumiI don't want to.
IzumiMasumi-kun......
ItaruSigh......
TsuzuruIt's difficult even if everyone but Masumi puts adlibs in.
SakuyaThe story this time is one which progresses through Alice's interactions with the other characters, so......
TsuzuruYeah. Hmm......
IzumiWhat if you try forgetting the play lines for a bit? Do street ACTs based on the setting of "Alice", and such.
Masumi......
Itaru......
Izumi(I-Impossible, is it......)
(This is a problem. Masumi-kun is stubborn, and Itaru-san is in 'giving up' mode......Will the play be alright at this rate......)
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